My writing slide

 

This is my writing slide. I'm teaching you how to be a good writer. These are what good quality's I think good writers need. Hopefully you learned something about this. Did you?

My poem.

 so here is my poem. 

Stay away from me predator I will send my elderly and your life will end early. 

so this my poem this week we have been learning about defence mechanisms and dangerous animals that we have been reading about. We read about termites, possums and Texas horned lizards. The termites would send there elderly to do there jobs for them.

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Free Writing - Corona Virus

 Week 4 term 2. weekend just over and i've come down with a cold. These days if you have symptoms of a cold people just assume that it's COVID 19. Day 1 feels like it's going on forever all I was doing was watching movies, sneezing, and sleeping. Day 2 it's nice and peaceful doing what I usually do. A loud noise started getting closer and sounded like kids were screaming as they entered the house. It was my little brother and sister screaming their heads off in laughter. When the kids got home they gave me the biggest headache ever. I thought I should be used to this. I hear loud voices every day.  

Science Fiction Setting

While on the battlecruiser traveling the cosmos laser beams rice shading off the battlecruiser. Captain falcon is dead asleep. The crew is holding the fort and the government is trying to take captain falcon and his crew out. Luckily the battle cruiser is made out of shiny chrome “ well not so shiny now “ titanium and its 100000 thousand square feet. Over 500 people lived on board this city in the sky. It’s technology was beyond anything that was currently available. But its most unique feature was its biotechnology high tech laser beam; it's so strong it can wipe out half of the world.   

Planet Guba

Little did they know their world was going to change. Gooba was an unnatural planet. Every person has powers. Not normal right. Well, nearly everyone. Except Blurb, he isn’t like the other kids. He hasn’t got powers. All the other kids are all out playing. They don’t let blurb join in. He’s picked last for everything. I wouldn’t blame them because he;s really skinny. He’s more light green than dark. He has weird spiky hair and no powers. Blurb has no friends. His only friend was his mum. She passed away from a disease. He’s alone, No family.After school he goes home and tries everything to see if he has powers.


A large crackling soul came from the centre of the planet, splitting the earth apart. P from the ground came zumba, a dark lord, villainous, evil and ready to destroy the people of guba. The capital panama has been overrun by zumba the stores everywhere his troop are going to people houses and holding them hostage there was a sertern present that has awakened zumba the one and only blurb the end.

Information report

This picture shows what an information report is. Read it and then read my intro down bellow. 80% of our waterways are fair to poor quality. The reason I'm writing this is because our water in Aotearoa is really yuck. In our precious water we've got top soil, algae, and rubbish. This water we use it for a lot of things we drink and our wildlife drinks it to. Our forest needs the water and the plants we eat as well. In my class ATN we are going to be testing our local stream to see how healthy our water is in our community.